Rate my team(Pt 1)(My first team)

Icy Ria (Glaceon) (F) @ Scope Lens
Ability: Snow Cloak
EVs: 6 HP/252 SAtk/252 SDef
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Hidden Power [Dragon]
- Ice Beam
- Protect
- Substitute
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Evil slasher (Weavile) (F) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Brick Break
- Ice Punch
- Aerial Ace
- Night Slash
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Ria's Charizard (Charizard) (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Roost
- Aerial Ace
- Belly Drum
- Fire Punch
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Pika pika (Pikachu) (F) @ Light Ball
Ability: Static
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Fake Out
- Grass Knot
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Dragon]
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Ria's Empoleon (Empoleon) (F) @ Splash Plate
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 6 HP/252 Def/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Aqua Jet
- Ice Beam
- Flash Cannon
- Surf
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Ria's Smeargle (Smeargle) (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Own Tempo
EVs: 252 HP/252 Spd/6 SDef
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Spore
- Agility
- Baton Pass
- Iron Defense

Looks good.

Thanks but theres one mistake i made

looks ok

What was the mistake?

Look at charazard

yeah, was the mistake for charazard because you trained it in attack and the nature was -attack?
other than that, really good team! i love the attacks there is a good range of moves there,
for the charazard: add the move "swords dance" because it raises the attack 2x.
I better at training dragons so if you need any help with them just ask ok
really good "HIGH FIVE!"

dragontrainergirl wrote:

yeah, was the mistake for charazard because you trained it in attack and the nature was -attack?
other than that, really good team! i love the attacks there is a good range of moves there,
for the charazard: add the move "swords dance" because it raises the attack 2x.
I better at training dragons so if you need any help with them just ask ok
really good "HIGH FIVE!"

charazard has Belly Drum,that take away 50% of my max hp but rasies my atk 6x

Yea, so theres no point in ev training it in atk.

ah! i see (why didint i know this ) lol anyway its very good!
thats a good move! tons better than swords dance! do you know where to get it??

Egg move.

ok thanks,